My dream poem.........!!!!!!!! Such a sweet poem.........
I wrote this poem in my college days ....... such a nice days
I think everyone fall in love at once in their life time..... I am just wright there feelings in my own word ...... i love this poem it's really close my heart....
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स्वाती... खरच खुप छान लिहिलिस आहेस कविता ही. ह्रुदयाला खुप भावनिक पणे स्पर्श करते कविता (तुझे रूप पाहता पाहता हा इश्वरनिर्मित देह सोडायाचाय...) मस्त मनातले शब्द लिहिलेस आहे. Awsome & Great poem Keep it up Dear
...अमेय जोशी
Awsome........ kay ga.... premat bimat padlis ki kay..... tyashivay he ase kahi suchat nahi..... last line is COOL...... i like it..... prem asach jiv otunach karayache asate....APRATIM.....
Dolyat pani aanlas last line vachun.
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